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Occupied Elsewhere

by Quinlan L Gibson

I'm so sorry.
What did you say?
I just turned my head,
and missed it.

What was that?
I didn't quite catch
the phrase.
My mind was occupied elsewhere.

Come again?
It went right by;
I was just starting
to walk away.
Did you just say
you loved me?

10/25/2002

Posted on 10/25/2002
Copyright © 2025 Quinlan L Gibson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/28/02 at 02:21 PM

It's nice to hear...but i prefer to feel it ! Nice read Quin.:)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/29/02 at 05:09 PM

Witty piece Quinlan. A follow up poem would be interesting, and a worthy challenge for you. :o)

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