(broken skin) flute flowers by Richard Paez(remember dead flute flowers on the poor mans grave as you stand there holding bare stems like swords)
do you remember what they told us? there are no monsters (no real monsters, anyway) but lying there under cold-night, warm-blankets more focused than ever since, breathing through your skin so they couldnt hear you, you knew: real monsters wore human skin
do you remember what they told you? all you need is self-respect and self-esteem but if it was up to you your self would have been far away (and moving) not buried under six feet of what could-have should-have would-have been
if only you had a little more time to smell the flowers to take long walks under a sky of endless possibilities (that seemed to fall under the sway of gravity way too soon for you to do anything about it)
do you remember what they told me? that all I needed was a little patience (it seems that all I do is wait for the fruit of plucked flowers rotting sweetly on the headstones of what could-have should-have would-have been)
10/18/2002 Author's Note: thanks to david for preserving it for me, tissi for encouraging me to post it properly, and victor for being there when it mattered- even though it's not directly about him, our shared experiences wrote this- i just put it down on paper.
Posted on 10/18/2002 Copyright © 2024 Richard Paez
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/18/02 at 06:11 PM Superbly both beautiful poetics and tragic message throughout, Richard. Thought provoking also. |
Posted by JD Clay on 10/20/02 at 10:52 PM Touche! Cogent, comprehensible and captivating come to mind malachi. Touche! p |
Posted by Sam Roberts on 12/06/04 at 10:40 PM it's so sad..a brilliant poem xoxoxoxoxoxoxox |
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