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Soiled Heart

by Julie Adams


fingers
weave her
into my hairlifeheart

like ribbon
satin fingers
interlock with my dark
roots

and it is there
that we meet
in the darkness
of earth

in the soil
we have dug
for ourselveseachotherdreams

and as her muddy fingers
meet my roots, tangled and raw
we allow eachother
each hairlifeheart
to b r e a t h e

10/14/2002

Posted on 10/14/2002
Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/15/02 at 04:10 AM

Although I'm not crazy about the new practice of sticking words together (Bonnie Adams and Tissie German seemed to have started that here) it works well in this poem, and doesn't interfere too much in the flow as it can and has in some cases.

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