| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 01/08/03 at 05:12 PM Thought I'd peek at your haiku - I really like this one - the image of shimmering heat the the distortion of distant objects is great - BTW, I don't think I congratulated you yet on making Poet Spotlight - well-deserved! d:-) |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/18/03 at 10:55 AM this haiku Jadi, is no mirage but an oasis for the word weary traveler. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/08/05 at 01:23 AM The imagery sharp, the moment clear, word perfect picture. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 12/16/06 at 09:05 PM this one is interesting... conveys the sense of movement... clever.. thanks for stopping by and for your kind sentiments.. I have tried my hand at senryus.. when you have time, do stop on by.. alisa...;-0 |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/22/07 at 07:56 PM I've commented on so many of your recent poems, that I had to find one I had not commented on. I can see the heat rising in the desert to create the mirage of "undulati[on]," just as I can see the caravan moving through the sand.
~Chelle~ |
