breathless by Julie Adamsemotions
sway in the breeze
where far off seas
find me breathless
the mantric flow
lures me in
high tide, submerged
in salty anticipation
i listen to the whisper
of conch shells
she knows me, the sea
she greets me
feeds me
like a whale
she breathes my name
into the unsuspecting sky 07/18/2002 Posted on 07/18/2002 Copyright © 2024 Julie Adams
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Posted by Lori Johnson on 01/10/04 at 06:23 PM I carry away with my these lines:
"She knows me, the sea, she breathes my name into the unsuspecting sky."
Lovely, peaceful.
:)
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Posted by Curt Allday on 05/06/06 at 05:31 AM excellent, thanks for the words as well!
I can very much see what you were saying about the rhythmic similiarities
:)
The last four lines here are a gift, love it |
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