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i know...
by Melissa Areli will one day give you my heart
this sacred dowry
not surrendering it easily
but willingly
revealing all the things i cannot hide
but needing you more with every passing hour
04/29/2002 Posted on 04/29/2002
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/14/03 at 01:03 AM Tender love poem Mel. The illusration goes well
with it.....Charlie |
| Posted by Leah Laiben on 03/14/03 at 07:00 PM this is beautiful...it made me all warm inside :) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/25/03 at 07:15 PM I love the fact that you do not capitalize the first letter of the piece and that you don't have any final punctuation... it leaves the piece timeless and neverending. Nicely worded. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/17/03 at 07:01 PM Very sweet |
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