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electric stars
by Melissa Arel
i feel the electric stars tonight
as they fall onto my fingertips
and tiptoe upon your skin
i am overcome by their persuasion
as the city lights burn the crescent moon
and we become Love's willing martyr
04/13/2002 Posted on 04/13/2002
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/08/03 at 09:40 AM you are becoming the master at combining words and images to "paint" the loveliest of poems...well done..again! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/14/03 at 01:00 AM Shockingly nice poem Mel...Charlie |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 08/26/03 at 02:22 AM SSSSmokin! I know you were smoking something when you wrote this one. Lol. What a terrible thing to say in the comment box! I'm glad you love me. ;) This one's awesome Melissa!! |
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