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No Girls Allowed by JD Clay I'd been eyeing the crotch Of that old poplar tree From my bedroom window Since I was six
It was perfect For a tree house
I saved all the scraps I could From the construction site up the road In a crowded corner of Dad's garage Keeping the plans in my head
Winter broke with a gentle thaw As the woodpeckers and I Worked overtime hammering The tree full of holes and Way too many nails
With the first leaf of spring I hung the sign over the door and A worn out beach towel Over the lop-sided window facing west I had wall-to-wall shag carpet And a roof that leaked but After all every tree house Needs a skylight
Dangling my feet From the open doorway I could see all the way Through summer Shimmering leaves for shade and A long rope ladder I pulled up To plot and plan And dream
I camped up there the first three days With a stack of comic books I used for a pillow My old sleeping bag with a broken zipper A dim flashlight and Two canteens full of Kool-Aid
Yeah it was a little cool at night but I would have stayed another week If I had more Twinkies
~jadi~
Previously posted on Wordchimes.
03/06/2002 Posted on 03/06/2002 Copyright © 2026 JD Clay
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/25/03 at 07:02 AM Hmph! I'm jealous of the speaker. I wanted a treehouse!
That aside, I love the imagery. And to be a huge copycat, yes, wonderful opening |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/04/03 at 10:56 PM This is a wonderful snapshot of youth. Splendid details that really enrich the experience. Very well crafted. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 08:11 PM I remember my tree house well. It was fun times.
Good poem Jadi....Charlie |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/26/04 at 05:46 AM What a wonderful poem, I can totally imagine young JD with a flashlight hiding poetry in his comic books lol. |
| Posted by Amanda Bullington on 01/13/05 at 01:28 AM Haha, the first few lines made me laugh. Definitely uniquely worded...and really sentimental..and yet not, at the same time. |
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