Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 05/06/03 at 03:18 AM i didnt have a tree house. *gets jealous*. as usual, JDMaster's pen saber saves the day. =) |
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/25/03 at 07:02 AM Hmph! I'm jealous of the speaker. I wanted a treehouse!
That aside, I love the imagery. And to be a huge copycat, yes, wonderful opening |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/04/03 at 10:56 PM This is a wonderful snapshot of youth. Splendid details that really enrich the experience. Very well crafted. |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 08:11 PM I remember my tree house well. It was fun times.
Good poem Jadi....Charlie |
Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/26/04 at 05:46 AM What a wonderful poem, I can totally imagine young JD with a flashlight hiding poetry in his comic books lol. |
Posted by Amanda Bullington on 01/13/05 at 01:28 AM Haha, the first few lines made me laugh. Definitely uniquely worded...and really sentimental..and yet not, at the same time. |
Posted by Carol Grant on 08/12/13 at 08:16 PM and to think...they were going to take your Twinkies away.. |