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No Girls Allowed

by JD Clay


I'd been eyeing the crotch
Of that old poplar tree
From my bedroom window
Since I was six

It was perfect
For a tree house

I saved all the scraps I could
From the construction site up the road
In a crowded corner of Dad's garage
Keeping the plans in my head

Winter broke with a gentle thaw
As the woodpeckers and I
Worked overtime hammering
The tree full of holes and
Way too many nails

With the first leaf of spring
I hung the sign over the door and
A worn out beach towel
Over the lop-sided window facing west
I had wall-to-wall shag carpet
And a roof that leaked but
After all every tree house
Needs a skylight

Dangling my feet
From the open doorway
I could see all the way
Through summer
Shimmering leaves for shade and
A long rope ladder I pulled up
To plot and plan
And dream

I camped up there the first three days
With a stack of comic books
I used for a pillow
My old sleeping bag with a broken zipper
A dim flashlight and
Two canteens full of Kool-Aid

Yeah it was a little cool at night but
I would have stayed another week
If I had more Twinkies



~jadi~


Previously posted on Wordchimes.

03/06/2002

Posted on 03/06/2002
Copyright © 2026 JD Clay

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 07/25/03 at 07:02 AM

Hmph! I'm jealous of the speaker. I wanted a treehouse! That aside, I love the imagery. And to be a huge copycat, yes, wonderful opening

Posted by Max Bouillet on 09/04/03 at 10:56 PM

This is a wonderful snapshot of youth. Splendid details that really enrich the experience. Very well crafted.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/11/03 at 08:11 PM

I remember my tree house well. It was fun times. Good poem Jadi....Charlie

Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/26/04 at 05:46 AM

What a wonderful poem, I can totally imagine young JD with a flashlight hiding poetry in his comic books lol.

Posted by Amanda Bullington on 01/13/05 at 01:28 AM

Haha, the first few lines made me laugh. Definitely uniquely worded...and really sentimental..and yet not, at the same time.

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