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Piery's Shore (II)
by Leonard M HawkesRight gaze, left gaze, grip.
Kindled blood stokes fleeting fire.
Icy clutch of lust. 02/27/2002 Posted on 02/27/2002
Copyright © 2024 Leonard M Hawkes
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| Posted by Glenn Currier on 02/21/03 at 06:51 PM This is a superb haiku. The contrast of fire and ice with the image of the "clutch of lust" (near rhymes but not quite -- honoring the haiku form) is effective and powerful. |
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