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body and earth

by Melissa Arel


the water pelts against my softened skin and soaks me to the bone

it rolls off my forehead and sits on my eyelashes slowly dripping down my cheek pooling onto my lips

i part my mouth open and invite its wet kisses

overflowing it finds its way south and runs freely until it reaches my toes

licking the moisture from my life's gateway i close my eyes and take in every last drop the rain has to offer

as it washes

cleanses

nourishes

purifies

both body and earth.

02/01/2002

Posted on 02/01/2002
Copyright © 2025 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by John Harder on 02/02/03 at 05:12 AM

i like the imagery.... now i need a shower:)

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/12/03 at 06:54 PM

Sounds like fun..I like the graphic....Charlie

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 10/25/04 at 10:23 AM

brilliant in its imagery....a perfect poem that will make everyone thirsty for more!

Posted by Tota Longmire on 12/21/04 at 04:40 AM

I wish it would rain! I want to go play in it and splash around in puddles now.

Posted by Allison Smith on 08/08/09 at 12:27 PM

Nice. Very nice.

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