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01.23.02 (11:28 AM )when i am alone

by Andrew S Adams

when i'm alone
the thoughts fill my head
of what i've past known
of what i've past said
the words blown through the breeze
steal my emotion
once lost but now found again
when there is no one
around to share
when there is no one
who even cares
then, my brilliance shines
as the whole world denies it
the beauty of mt mind
does not matter a bit

when i'm alone
the world is revealed
and i am shown
all that is real
the truth hidden
seen by solely me
the lies, forbidden
this is what i see
but the fake world
tells me otherwise
it shows me it's evil;
lies are truth- truths are lies
they do not expect me to know
the things that i learn
when i am alone.

01/24/2002

Posted on 01/24/2002
Copyright © 2024 Andrew S Adams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rommel Cruz on 11/05/02 at 01:34 PM

I have to agree, it is when we are alone that we really get to contemplate on matters, and as you have done, write a simple and truthful poem. Im sure a lot of people can relate to this. =)

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