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valentine (Chris Sorrenti's "Three Words" Challenge)

if (i)
could melt words
soft-over-splatter-page gentle
your beauty like a
(love)
-liquid
then id truly know i
could flow
at least for (you)

01/21/2002

Posted on 01/21/2002
Copyright © 2024 Bruce W Niedt

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/09/03 at 05:31 PM

Very nice Bruce! Highly original and evocative response.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/15/03 at 04:15 PM

Leaves me speechless..:)

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