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Snow (haiku)

by David R Spellman

 
magical dustings
sown with heaven laden peace
surely blizzards come!
 
 
 

01/17/2002

Posted on 01/17/2002
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alex Smyth on 12/12/03 at 05:50 AM

This makes me think of standing in the front window watching the silence falling.. and yes, we could use a blizzard of peace and blessings now. Wonderful haiku:o)

Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 12/13/03 at 07:56 PM

Excellent haiku....There is something special about snow falling from the heavens...it provokes it's own mystical feeling

Posted by Mara Meade on 12/13/03 at 11:50 PM

Yes... the quiet...sometimes the quiet before the storm! Beautiful any way you look at it!

Posted by Graeme Fielden on 12/14/03 at 12:09 PM

Brrr...sounds cold! Surely it's a 2 edged sword between a magical dusting & the blizzard...Yin & yang I guess...Thanks for sharing Dave :)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/20/03 at 04:23 AM

I like what Wendy said. Your poem is so taoistic... the light and the darkness in three simple but beautiful lines.

Posted by Bethany Lee on 05/16/08 at 01:49 PM

Surely blizzards come...and go! It's just the ebb and flow. Bravo!

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