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Trip (work in progress)
by Deanna M GritsonisMy Secret trip
One suitcase filled with promises
A plane ride that I cried on
I did it for you
For that feeling that I am choking to ease into melting love
You stood there waiting like in the movies
Gorgeous in blue
Eyes of love and tears
My secret trip
East coast
Something to take in
The cold air from the harbor
Curled up on the couch
Wrapped in your arms
Never wanting it to end
But its a trip
There is a time to head back to reality
So close to marrying me
Ten seconds to short
My husband across the sea
I await your boat
The ring
Your kiss
My love
The secret trip
12/11/2001 Author's Note: To my heart and soul.
Posted on 12/11/2001
Copyright © 2025 Deanna M Gritsonis
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 02/25/03 at 05:27 AM Not the typical "love" poem, I like it. Congrats on POTD. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/25/03 at 01:41 PM This is a magnificent heartfelt verse that rings true with emotion. I love the energy in your words, Deanna. Congratulations on becoming Poet Of The Day.
Peace... |
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