| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/31/08 at 02:26 PM Beautiful RCat! And what a gallant you were in offering to risk the sting to rescue her arm... I have so many cherished memories like this with my kids and grandson. They make life worth living in sooooo many ways. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/01/08 at 12:24 AM Quite a story. Suspense, plot, and cool conclusion. All so succinctly in one poem! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/02/08 at 05:27 AM A great read and picture to go with it Rusty....CharMin |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/05/08 at 12:03 AM From sweet to silly, pleasing all ages. I really enjoyed this, RCat! |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/10 at 10:55 AM I do love this piece, it's story to simple yet so all encompassing...just lovely lesson and moment captured...I enjoy the humor to the end also...though I might suggest the use of the word Asian instead of Oriental, as that word is quite dated and offensive to some, since it generally refers to objects, not people... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/29/10 at 04:07 PM Congrats on POTD! Always a pleasure to read this one! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/29/10 at 04:27 PM What a delight to find this as POTD. Congratulats!
p.s.
It's still reads as skillfully and is as amusing now as it was when I first read it. |
