.... 11/23/2004 08:56 p.m.
skinny-dipping in your essence<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" />
my soul found herself blanketed
In a comforter stuffed with love
Your arms, safe concrete walls
of a new home us
this needs to grow up to become a full poem...has great potential, sweetheart!..MUAHS!!
I like it the way it is. Just give it a title! :o)
