Broken Pieces of Me
05/26/2003 07:09 p.m.
... is still not finished. Even if it already has a lot of comments, people saying they like it, I'm still not satisfied with it. The ending, I believe is too weak. I am contemplating on putting it up on the poetry clinic. The problem is that well it has already so many comments on it that people might think I just posted it to fish out more comments. *sigh* Being considered as ending "How long will i remain Ripped from myself Shattered by your dreams Broken ino nothingness"