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Rain poems
11/17/2002 02:45 a.m.
I just noticed that the poems I like the most among my works are those that have something to do with rain. "Rainy Days", "Paperboat" and of course my FAVORITE "Life Washed Away". They're also similar in other ways, in that they repeat lines. This is most evident in Life washed away and Rainy days as I repeated the lines at least 4 times in each! LOL. These poems also deal with different topics. Paperboat is a happy/reminiscing poem, Rainy days, which was originally titled Lazy days, was well about how lazy I feel when it's raining. Life washed away, the longest of all I've written, is about well you guessed it, life!. LOL. (Who am I talking to anyway, as if anyone reads this. Oh yeah, Anne did one time. But will she read again?). I wonder, will anyone figure out the use of repeating lines in this one? Well yes it's for some sort of transition, but for what? Hmmm, I aint saying. bleh. LOL

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