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eating stinky cheese

by Ronald A Pavellas

eating stinky cheese
the smell and taste returns me
to primeval ooze

03/12/2017

12/18/2017

Posted on 12/18/2017
Copyright © 2024 Ronald A Pavellas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Brian Francis on 12/19/17 at 02:25 AM

I recently composed a haiku (5-7-5) and was told that 575 was outdated and real haiku are composed even more concisely 454. Supposedly 575 went out of vogue during the beatnik period bla bla bla mora bla syllables. It amazes me that people hold such opinions. Anyway, I love your haiku even though I find it stinky peace --bf

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