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Nothing Rhymes

by Johnny Crimson

The engraving felt Celtic
as we swam past on credit;
rowing down the river Derrick
with a drifting sense of ethics.

The rage was ravenous and hectic
we were scraps of freeze-dried lettuce
lapped up by the medic,
swaying in time with the metrics.

Our hair was half netted
as the petals all petted;
like some relic, or skeptic
laying at the bottom of the septic.

All the aesthetics
of being angelic
were mostly inauthentic, cosmetic/domestic,
while the best of us remained so vibrant, so electric.

It's quite generic, these genetics.
Oh, what hysterics, and how majestic;
this pandemic
of regretted synthetics.

This vendetta's psychedelic.
Quite esoteric, this systemic pathogenic.
While all the inhalable carcinogenics
make us dream in double,like schizophrenics.

01/26/2017

Posted on 01/26/2017
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by LK Barrett on 02/05/17 at 04:36 AM

...let me say it here: slant rhyme IS rhyme...and you did very, very well. Thank you for the smile you made for me as I read this out loud, with emphasis...keep on...LK

Posted by George Hoerner on 07/26/17 at 07:04 PM

I'm not sure it seems a little long! But that's Ok cause it seems to have something to say!!

Posted by George Hoerner on 07/26/17 at 07:07 PM

I notice now it was written before your comment on short poems!! Sorry about that. Now keep on writing!

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