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by Johnny Crimson

You are the content
of my creation,
the authoritative black skull
on the back of a harlot's knees.

Your milk pulses blue,
a vibrant dinosaur glow
that sinks deep beneath
the crust of the past.

You're all bat skeletons
and golden maid remixes,
dancing slowly past the bubble gum parade,
in no imagination spankx and yesterday's eyeliner.

I'd behead the first healthy born,
with scaled axe and miner's pick,
leaving no skin scales attached,
just to get a piece of that.

06/07/2013

Posted on 06/07/2013
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 06/08/13 at 11:17 AM

I don't know but it sounds like love to me!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/10/13 at 10:50 PM

You certainly know how to hold us on an image.

Posted by Cassandra Leigh on 06/11/13 at 11:10 PM

There is some really amazing subtle alliteration and consonant rhyme here that gives this such a fantastic rhythm. It could almost be turned into a spoken word piece, if you're into that.

Posted by Paul Marino on 06/12/13 at 10:04 PM

nice

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