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December 10

The tree comes in dark
and smelling of fresh citrus.
We sink our hands in.

12/10/2012

Posted on 12/13/2012
Copyright © 2024 Meghan Helmich

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/16/12 at 03:38 AM

Perfect.

Posted by Gail Wolper on 08/09/14 at 12:01 AM

Would the last line be better as 'we sink in our hands"? just a suggestion for more power. Nice write I like your poems

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