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I've got to leave now.

by Johnny Crimson

We can call it aces baby.
We're back to basics
and I'm tired of chasing your crazy
butterscotch face around town so lets just face it.
You're not as great as I think and you could use a slight facelift,
depending on which direction you happen to be facing.

Don't mistake this for hating,
trust me I'm just struggling to even make it.
I happen to know that you're making a matrix.
Although,I found it a bit racist,
I enjoyed the part with the rapist who took over the spaceship.

He didn't just took it he take it.
I mean he took it, forgive me I'm still in poetry training.
So lets just say you're amazing although they all call you average.

Girl does that binder say Holebrook Elementary?

10/23/2012

Posted on 10/23/2012
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 10/25/12 at 04:06 AM

what an interesting read - i had to go back and reread it several times, each read through, gleaming more from your imagery, wording and turn of phrase. what a compelling read!

Posted by Laura Doom on 11/11/12 at 01:31 PM

The shake down for faking my tricks? Have you been taking your metrics?
I think my tongue just poked out my eyes...
Full house, aces over queens
[creased up and folding]

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