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Eating my to do list

by Johnny Crimson

The discontent
of many men.
The shadow doesn't show.

A phallic shaft,
a candle's wrath.
They both can take a blow.

Searching for
a demon's sword,
buried deep within the snow.

Bleached eye holes,
with dyed insides.
It takes someone to know.

Spinning body,
a serpent's prodigy.
It's quickly beginning to slow.

The pace inside
a serveants eyes,
that now begin to grow.

Buried Thai,
with guts sublime,
She didn't want to go.

Forgive me nots
and goodbye notes,
I've murdered my first Jane Doe.

10/22/2012

Posted on 10/22/2012
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 10/24/12 at 01:12 PM

I saw your post on the forum and decided to check out your 2012 folder. This is the first one I've read and I'm already hooked.The second stanza gave me a chuckle. You finished it off fabulously. That last line is a killer.

Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 10/26/12 at 01:54 PM

"O" is a very flexible syllable.

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