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overpass
by Christel Crewsparched pavement
curves, winding along
dusted, barren
landscapes
life signs
vanished, stillness creeping
through bleak
translucent skies
08/20/2012 Author's Note: not sure if this is finished but came to a dead-end and decided to post it. thoughts?
Posted on 08/21/2012
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tim D Livingston on 08/24/12 at 12:17 AM I like it. It's not sad or happy... it's peaceful in a mellow kinda way. I thought of this summer's drought. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/03/12 at 09:49 AM I've driven many an interstate and felt exactly like this...I think the poem says it all and needs no further words, Christel |
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