Home   Home

Middle Man

by Johnny Crimson

I stare hard and long
at the edges of the sea
trying to separate
the salt from the waves.

A cadence ensued
with my mind transfixed,
I began to count the droplets
as my eyes started to close.

Circus mimes eating time;
a seven mile lake of fire.
Rabid humans ankle biting,
the girl with blue fingers bats her eyes.

Softly I approach the bench
to read my own belated sentencing,
as the judge plays solataire
with chicklet colored teeth.

Scream this fever into my skull
a regulated,structured, sanctioned chaos.
The ravens take buckets of my blood
and pour it over the crowds below.

The pinching crab
then opens my eyes
and the sea has turned to a rust
that now matches the sand beneath me.

Everytime I walk over there
to your house to kiss
I try to forget about your sisters lips,
and the ones on her face too.

08/03/2012

Posted on 08/03/2012
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 08/03/12 at 12:33 PM

Reminds me of something that happened many many years ago.

Posted by A. Paige White on 08/03/12 at 06:52 PM

OMG, last line got me roaring, so I have to comment it first. I adore the word picture "circus mimes eating time" which is a much lighter concept than what you started with in trying to separate salt from sea (very much how I have felt for the last couple of years!)."Rabid humans ankle biting" I love too because of how you twisted it for me. I've heard it in the context of children most of my life (ankle biters) and it just reminds me how sometimes we just don't grow up. I just love this. Highest marks again. Are you taking a creative writing class or something? wow. Afraid I'm going to run out of room for my schmoozing.

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/04/12 at 05:39 PM

I adore some of the contrasts here: "softly" vs "scream"; "chaos" vs. "kiss". You definitely fed my imagination with this!

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)