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prescient tension

by Laura Doom

if I were to pit my palms
 against this skinny guilt-snared stomach
 my fingers would freeze
  shatter
  plummet
  encrypt the discontent and save
  not for security but self-preservation
  to snatch the anaclitic kiss of cryogenesis

if you were to do the same
moisture would drip
 from every artifice
 of my cadaver
 rinsing sweat from tainted tissue
  swilling sweetness round my hollowed eyes
  and we would feign evaporation
  long into the light
  each synthetic high an analgesic flight

07/16/2012

Posted on 07/16/2012
Copyright © 2024 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 07/16/12 at 12:38 PM

There should be no guilt in what comes naturally. Good write lady.

Posted by Jim Benz on 07/16/12 at 03:33 PM

After several trips to the dictionary, this poem thawed into something very beautiful--quite unlike the freeze/thaw continuum I thought I was reading. But then there's the complication of synthetic feigning ...

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/16/12 at 11:42 PM

Erotic in the way an early David Cronenberg film is erotic. So, basically, it's awesome.

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