soon rises the sun to remove sleep's thin hands from my skull okay, okay sleep grumbles into his raincoat streaked with the sediment of evaporated dreams and dances his dusky way out the westward window
06/20/2012
Author's Note: waking early, writing late.
Posted on 06/20/2012Copyright © 2026 Peter Hsu
I really like this piece except for the 'okay, okay'. If you dropped that it would improve the quality. But that is just my opinion.
