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Sugar
by Uriel TovarYou say you're a
Hard pill
To swallow
I say you're Hard
Rock
Candy
Purple and smoky white
Amethyst
Scratchy down my throat
Settling
Like cancer
In my gut.
05/19/2012 Posted on 05/19/2012
Copyright © 2026 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/19/12 at 10:35 PM Wow! I'd love to see your ode to aspartame after reading some of the horrific reports I just read about it. Fantastic! |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 05/22/12 at 03:25 PM Wonderful. Just the right length, and you provide a great contrast from hard pill to candy to cancer. |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 05/27/12 at 02:43 PM incredible...the progression...the efficiency...love it. |
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