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The last time I got off was on a roller coaster

by Anastasia Lyn

The last time I got off was on a roller coaster.
I'm pretty sure everyone heard me -
I don't do anything quietly.
The moment I go over the top
is that moment of complete
weightlessness
and the sudden pull
down.

05/09/2012

Posted on 05/09/2012
Copyright © 2026 Anastasia Lyn

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/10/12 at 01:16 AM

Sounds like you know how to enjoy the ride. Fantastic, engaging metaphor.

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