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"It Was Too Big"

by Max Phineas

It was too big
To carry all on my own
So I let it spill out
And it let me breathe
And now it keeps me afloat.

03/29/2012

Posted on 03/30/2012
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mo Couts on 03/30/12 at 01:19 PM

Short, sweet, and to the point. I appreciate this, Max. Nicely done.

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 03/31/12 at 01:01 AM

let it go and keep breathing .. i hear breathing is good..

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