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losing my horizon

by Patricia J Reed

i need.
to untether myself from the ground
and throw abandon into the stars
while clutching onto a deeply
venerable hope
that you'll surrender a breath for me
and together we'd discover worlds.
tangled eternity.
knowing each other with emotion
that you've dared only whisper to
the night.


Author's Note: since starting a family and a business, i very rarely find the time and the creativity to write - except for brief glimpses of raw strangled emotions. i'll try to get those up a little more often - who know's what those will be!

Posted on 03/21/2012
Copyright © 2021 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/21/12 at 08:38 PM

This was a fantastic glimpse any way you go about it.

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 03/22/12 at 06:36 AM

WOW! vulnerability is hard to come by... MFS

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