Home - haiku sequence by Paganini Jones
the computer
my brightest light
lost pencil
yeowling cat
last bus arrives, departs
without stopping
church spire
holds up a flickering star
owls hunting
03/01/2012 Author's Note: Example from out March Kukai (now open for entries) For more information, see the latest thread in the Tadpole Society forum.
Posted on 03/01/2012 Copyright © 2024 Paganini Jones
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Rob Littler on 03/02/12 at 02:30 AM I have this image of a desk, a window with a world outside. My mind frames it so nicely, but probably more than you intend...as always. |
Posted by Joe Cramer on 03/02/12 at 04:38 PM ... excellent..... |
Posted by Jim Benz on 03/02/12 at 11:58 PM hmm. These make me wonder what the theme of the kukai is. I could look, of course, but trying to guess from these three examples is much more fun! |
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