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One Word Comments

by Joe Cramer

one word
comments
are all I
usually give

I mean,
if I am
to write too much more,
put too much more on a page,
why, oh why
not pen a poem.


Pen a poem,
or two,
or too many?
Two hundred?
Two thousand?

Where does it stop?
When does it end?
My liquid pen
flows forever on

and thusly
my comments
remain
succinctly
penned.

This is where
it ends....

02/21/2012

Author's Note: ... on writing profusely....

Posted on 02/21/2012
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/21/12 at 05:33 PM

...excellent...

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 02/21/12 at 05:35 PM

I like your one word comments...it is sufficient for me to know that you like what I write....and for me your sincerity!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/27/12 at 03:27 PM

Joe- When I get a one word comment by you; it means a lot to me. It's your style.

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