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You.....

by Curtis Sethaler

This pen prick in my finger
Bleeds more than that time
When you slit my wrist

Every broken promise,
Every heartstring
Stretched and straining

Hurts more

Than every time you lied

And sealed it with a kiss……

02/16/2012

Posted on 02/17/2012
Copyright © 2024 Curtis Sethaler

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kris Mara on 03/01/12 at 01:02 AM

I love the flow of this...not just in sounds, but in the twists it takes...the honesty in your words cuts through to a place your reader knows... really love the first stanza for what it means to me... (hope I'm making sense tonight...)

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