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in stitches

by Olivia Weinkein

it's all needle-point, this life
stitching pieces together, faces,
the moments that could one day
save you,

remembering, i am remembering
and thinking that maybe
you were right.

it isn't a guessing game
with an unknown
ending

it's all needle-point, this life.

02/08/2012

Posted on 02/09/2012
Copyright © 2024 Olivia Weinkein

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/09/12 at 01:15 AM

It is what it is, right? Wonderful.

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/09/12 at 01:41 AM

Like Gabe, I like it too, but unlike him I think it is what it isn't. We just make it what ever we want it to be. Just pick and choose the pieces and put them together.

Posted by Mo Couts on 02/09/12 at 10:11 PM

What a great analogy you've provided here! Life is so full of all the things it is AND isn't! nicely done.

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