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Wanted

by Lewis Mitchell

Wanted: A mender of severed dreams and broken hearts.
I have tried the path of forgiveness but it seems that is nay where the healing starts.
A difficult task this will be, for the last one couldn’t be bothered to leave any crucial parts.
The one who finds my piece collecting soul shan’t be eluded by mysterious arts.
Welcome: Ye who has braved the deluminated path, thee who has tussled with and mastered these seeming lost, elusive, and secret healing arts.
You who prove to be no stranger to crushed dreams and shattered hearts.
Thy have met with my hollow soul and helped to collect those essential scattered parts.
Thanks to your tireless efforts, the repairs can begin on not one but two extirpated hearts.
Back in our own bodies, we can walk this slowly brightening path together and take bliss in knowing that finally, the longed for healing truly starts.

01/20/2012

Posted on 01/20/2012
Copyright © 2025 Lewis Mitchell

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dorian Black on 01/20/12 at 06:05 AM

Great write brother. Welcome to pathetic!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/20/12 at 10:02 PM

The form is a little rocky, but that's a very minor nit-pick compared to your impressive command of imagery and language. Good stuff, and welcome indeed.

Posted by Gail Wolper on 02/04/13 at 11:02 PM

Fantastic! Wonderful things to ponder here!

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