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January 8 2012

by Elizabeth Jill





Tree becomes my verb
treeing myself, each footstep
ignoring the fog





01/08/2012

Posted on 01/08/2012
Copyright © 2024 Elizabeth Jill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 01/08/12 at 05:46 PM

I love this.

Posted by Rob Littler on 01/08/12 at 06:45 PM

I get the image of treeing myself too, the essence of that...the beautiful notion of that...then that is right beside the action of feet, stepping. I can feel the tree rings forming, ringing in my ears...a tree of mine own making. Thanks for this poem.

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