| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 12/29/11 at 02:39 AM Johnny - there is always this mix of magic and reality to your pieces that stuns me. This is no exception. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/29/11 at 03:07 AM What an excellent longing! Great write. Thank you. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/29/11 at 03:43 AM "Longing" sums it up, and that ending burns the house down. |
| Posted by Steve Michaels on 12/29/11 at 05:35 AM I haven't read you in a long time - nor anyone as I've been hiding under a rock. That being said - I like your new place - it's a smoother drink! |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 12/29/11 at 02:08 PM Hot to trot, my friend. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/29/11 at 07:18 PM ... brilliantly evocative..... |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 01/01/12 at 09:17 AM Brilliant! Don't we all know that dull, dead ache in loss! |
