{ pathetic.org }
 

Dreams and Slopes

by Jeffrey Parren

Am I dreaming?

The silence
the stares
they're absentee glares.

Falling asleep
with open eyes
I'm launched
into another space.

That's better.

My biggest fear
is I'll be dreaming
when the dream
is happening.

Am I living
the dream now?

Life's valleys
and plateaus alike
are dream's nemeses.

Life's a big ski slope.

Been riding this downhill
quite long enough.

Time to hop the lift
starting a new dream scape.

Dreams and slopes.

I was never a good skier.

12/28/2011

Posted on 12/28/2011
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/28/11 at 02:43 PM

... brilliant.....

Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/28/11 at 06:35 PM

I feel I can interpret this poem in at least a couple ways. Although it is written to be positive and inspiring, I could also see it as an expression of "dreams going downhill." Thank you for the positive ending of hopping back on the lift.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)