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Intentions of a Secret admirer
by Dorian BlackI whisper lazily into the wind,
watching the quiet letters dance
dizzily into the wisped clouds
of the frozen morning skies.
They spiral transiently
over the city-scape,
with a nonchalant grace
that can only be truly appreciated
by someone with your eloquence.
Loftily they sway to kiss your nape,
taunting your spine to chills.
You'll chalk it off to a cold morning,
but these words are a fair warning. 12/27/2011 Posted on 12/27/2011
Copyright © 2024 Dorian Black
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/27/11 at 08:42 PM ... outstanding..... |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 12/28/11 at 12:25 AM Full rating on this one, wonderful imagery and creativity on your part. |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 12/28/11 at 02:26 AM I read this and wondered why in the world hadn't I ever thought of that... I always burn my writing and let them blow through the air to reach my intended... Just loved this. ~N |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 12/28/11 at 08:49 PM I LOVED this! Secret admirers are interesting and sometimes show us things about ourselves we'd previously overlooked; awesome. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/03/12 at 11:13 PM Beautifully written but really creeped me out. It did exactly what you intended then, I suppose, for this reader anyway. Having had someone sneak into my sunroom before and be chased away at gunpoint by my son and son-in-law, it hearkens back for me.... |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/16/12 at 04:33 PM I like the way I had to read it a couple of times to get a clear image in my own head. I love the mystery of wondering who this is intended for. It gives me ideas about my own secretly admired, and it feels like magic here. Very worthy POTD! Congratulations! |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 02/17/12 at 12:57 AM Still love this... and congrats on POTD! Well deserved :) ~N |
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