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Narcoleptic
by Alison McKenzieI enter the dark
Of that endless
Somber tunnel,
Deliriously delicious.
Rain bounces off
Subatomic particles -
Ice in my veins.
I’m so grateful
To be alive.
It stings,
But it moves me.
12/19/2011 Posted on 12/20/2011
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 12/20/11 at 01:17 AM Sometimes the stinging is what pushes us forward...beautifully done <3. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 12/20/11 at 02:22 AM To sting is to feel alive..and to live is indeed to move..Wonderful!!! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 12/20/11 at 10:10 PM Didn't 'Big Daddy' say "it's OK if I hurt because I know that way I'm still alive. Good write lady. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 12/21/11 at 12:17 PM ... an excellent write..... |
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