Darkness and a light (haiku) by Paganini Jones
sputtering flame
trying to not see shadows
dancing
12/06/2011 Author's Note: My winning entry in the Tadpole society November Kukai contest
Posted on 12/06/2011 Copyright © 2025 Paganini Jones
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Adam Dyson on 12/06/11 at 06:54 PM Very evocative! Lovely use of the form. |
Posted by Lori Blair on 12/06/11 at 10:02 PM Incredible! and Congrats on the win! Well deserved! :) |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/07/11 at 10:14 PM Looks like a winner to me. |
Posted by Linda Fuller on 12/07/11 at 10:38 PM Ditto, ditto...and ditto above. Really like this one, Pags. |
Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/11/11 at 05:48 PM I love haiku, and this one is beautiful. Kudos! |
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