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Darkness and a light (haiku)

by Paganini Jones




sputtering flame
trying to not see shadows
dancing



12/06/2011

Author's Note:
My winning entry in the Tadpole society November Kukai contest

Posted on 12/06/2011
Copyright © 2024 Paganini Jones

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adam Dyson on 12/06/11 at 06:54 PM

Very evocative! Lovely use of the form.

Posted by Lori Blair on 12/06/11 at 10:02 PM

Incredible! and Congrats on the win! Well deserved! :)

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/07/11 at 10:14 PM

Looks like a winner to me.

Posted by Linda Fuller on 12/07/11 at 10:38 PM

Ditto, ditto...and ditto above. Really like this one, Pags.

Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/11/11 at 05:48 PM

I love haiku, and this one is beautiful. Kudos!

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