11/29/11 by Meghan HelmichI know she sent for me
to slice open and drain me of my feelings
on the sloppy drinkers at the bar and their love lives,
but I've learned to be wary
of those doe eyes and dimples;
she gets extra vindictive when she's been in the wine. 11/30/2011 Posted on 11/30/2011 Copyright © 2025 Meghan Helmich
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Posted by Ava Blu on 11/30/11 at 09:41 PM Ha, that last line reminds me of our recent conversations. :)
I like it all. |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/30/11 at 11:05 PM Hey, I met that chick once. Brings to mind the line in that Tom Waits song about never meeting nice girls in coffee shops. Outstanding work. |
Posted by Sal Haefling on 12/01/11 at 03:03 PM mmmm, totally know what you're getting at here. |
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