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Sadistic Lovers
by Dorian BlackI'm not so sure that I can see your point
when your dagger is buried deep in the spine
that's wrapped around your finger;
A silver will bent across your golden trigger.
It won't be long 'til you find another guy,
that's willing to waste your time.
When it's all said and done
and your mouth's around the gun
you'll see that Sadistic love is blind. 11/25/2011 Posted on 11/25/2011
Copyright © 2025 Dorian Black
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 11/25/11 at 06:34 PM Ooohhh...this one stung and was beautiful, all at once. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/25/11 at 07:12 PM So much said in such a small pool of words! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/25/11 at 08:21 PM Sadistic indeed. Brilliant, too. |
| Posted by Jody Pratt on 01/15/12 at 09:09 PM Awesome, I agree a lot is said in so few words. My favorite part was the image of a spine wrapped around a finger. Very unique. |
| Posted by Kara Hayostek on 03/05/12 at 12:49 AM Wow! That ending is amazing....I recently wrote something about a gun too, but mine is slightly different... |
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