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When We Are Apart
by Joe CramerI miss you
when we are apart
wondering when we will start
our lives together, as two.
I miss you
this much is true. 11/25/2011 Posted on 11/25/2011
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Dorian Black on 11/25/11 at 06:14 PM A classic piece of lovelorn despair. Simplicity can ruin poetry, but I feel that it adds to the value of this. Well done and thank you for sharing. -- Dorian |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 11/28/11 at 03:11 AM So short but heartfelt and isn't that how it is? the beginnings though just a fraction of time can weigh so much more on that shortened time..great piece! |
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