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Inadequate

by Jeffrey Parren

In those windows called mirrors
Not many know the shades
Are one tug away from being up &
Depending on that volition
Everyone is capable of
Quenching that hidden thirst
Usually seemingly effortlessly
All the while trusting fades
That ego into eraser shards
Eloquently destroying everything.

11/17/2011

Author's Note: 3 adverbs in a row? F%^& yeah.

Posted on 11/17/2011
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/17/11 at 11:50 AM

... outstanding.....

Posted by George Hoerner on 11/17/11 at 01:48 PM

All I can say is that this poem is far far away from being 'Inadequate'. Another fine write!

Posted by Mo Couts on 11/17/11 at 04:06 PM

Awesome!

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