Home  

(2) The south raised us

by Meghan Helmich

When we were eight,
you were in Houston
wearing a Donatello Ninja Turtle costume
and stepping on ant hills
to watch the frenzy.

In Birmingham, I wore neon pink
and slid down the driveway
on my roller skates
until the neighbor boy came by
and pushed me to the ground.

I cried when the peroxide bubbled
on my skinned knee.

You laid on a tree branch
and wrote stories with your eyes.

11/07/2011

Posted on 11/07/2011
Copyright © 2024 Meghan Helmich

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 11/08/11 at 03:09 AM

The last two lines do it for me.

Posted by Sal Haefling on 11/08/11 at 02:01 PM

"and wrote stories with your eyes"...beautiful thoughts come to my mind with this. thanks for your talented work, meghan.

Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 11/09/11 at 05:41 PM

why am i reading these backwards. that last line sold me. also, there's something romantically human about the skinned knee experience, we've all been there.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/09/11 at 06:54 PM

... brilliant.....

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)