| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/05/11 at 01:09 AM Ah yes, and how often to we bite off more than we can chew. Well done jadi! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/05/11 at 11:11 AM ... excellent word choice and useage..... |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/05/11 at 07:20 PM Sometimes these recognitions still amaze us, the wondering of it...and yet if plain daylight is not poetical what is? What love slays us if we don't bite our tongue off over every kind of love? Thanks. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 11/06/11 at 12:11 PM I love every well placed word of this sweet expression. Cute and clever at the same time---must be someone very special inspiring such wit and rhyme. :) |
| Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 11/13/11 at 03:41 AM Perhaps there is nothing you could have done. In these cases the wit is often too wild to be tethered. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/15/11 at 02:32 AM Jadi...to bedazzle someone so is probably each girl's dream at one time or another on their journey through life. I recall loving your poem and what inspired it then, and loving it more now that I can admire the scenario from an array of perspectives and savour your words as one would vintage wine. Then
there is the beauty of nature that ever bedazzles...the bedazzled reader...an more
lovelightsmiles…*m.a
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