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Z?

by Bert Williams

If I stay
And keep still
Would the blades
Become ill

If I gave you
A black hole
Could we fall in
And never go home

Love unlaced
Nothing in our eyes
With no space
For our hate to occupy

And could we live
Off of this
Could we stay
And bathe in it

Breathe in the lies to stay alive
Breathe you in for just tonight
Indulge myself on your ties
Before I decide to let go of mine

Love is numb
For only a second
Then it’s done
Abuse now beckons

Nothing to count on
Just a pain
Nothing to calm you
No gasoline stains

No sound is open
Nothing exists
Nowhere to begin
But everything to forget

I cannot wait
Till waiting is done
Sleeping to awaken
Our black hole in the sun

Oh could we live
Off of this
Could we stay
And bathe in it

Breathe in the lies to stay alive
Breathe you in for just tonight
Indulge myself on your ties
Before I decide to let go of mine

Till waiting is done
Our black hole in the sun …

10/27/2011

Posted on 10/27/2011
Copyright © 2025 Bert Williams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/27/11 at 02:08 PM

Is this meant to be a song? It's got a nice, lyrical flow to it.

Posted by Paganini Jones on 10/27/11 at 02:45 PM

Welcome to Pathetic - good to have you here

"Love unlaced
Nothing in our eyes
With no space
For our hate to occupy"

Yes - I rather like this stanza - "love unlaced" could merit a whole poem to itself I think

Posted by Leslye Writer on 11/04/11 at 09:49 PM

The place is familiar , the waking of the black hole in the sun. I felt it all the way through. Indulging in the ties .....I really like it!!!!

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